Review Detail of InHisName in The King...

Writing quality to be is terrible, but to be fair at least it's coherent. What let's this story down however is that the MC's characterisation completely ignores his previous life. A high-performing soldier for over a decade? That should surely have some affect on the psyche, and how an individual should behave right? Not this MC... I did like the rationale for why the MC is going for a leadership build, but honestly, what use is all the stats in the world when the MC has mentality of a child. As of chapter 10 he has already left himself in vulnerable position, and soon after got scammed. The final point can be positive, or negative (depending on the reader). When readers gift stones to the novel, the MC (in the novel) will receive equivalent 'gifts from the gods.' In practice, this means MC can level up without even having to do anything. Which in my opinion quite frankly ruins all point in progression. Had potential...but alas.