What can I say? GREAT START! Tho I really have nothing to say just yet as it was the first chappie, I liked how it started. It offered the readers a glimpse of the current time of the FL yet, the vagueness of it will make you wonder if the heartwarming vibe will remain as it is. Nevertheless, this will keep you hook! Give it a try! đ To author-nim, goodluck! đ
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