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KiiaraLv124yr
2020-04-26 10:30

*poof* popping in for the first time in Matsu-san’s book! From the start, I had already fallen in love with the synopsis. My first thought was how the author has a way with words. The synopsis was beautifully written that it instantly drew my attention. I have never read any of Matsu’s book before, but this “Eternal Melody” feels like it’s calling me. I absolutely did not regret picking this up. When I read it, I feel the subtle emotion conveyed through the writings. It’s subtle but powerful enough to intrude me emotionally. I feel conflicted with all these complex feelings coming at me at the same time. Nostalgia, sadness, heartwarming, soothing until it becomes heartbreakingly beautiful. The story may not come out strong at first but it will slowly push you to the corner, until it all come pouring. Matsu-san you really caught me off guard midway. Lastly, I’m so very much fond of your writing style. Yes, it may need certain editing for the typos but nevertheless, I love the simplicity your portraying. It is clean, lean, concise, and without too much adornment and yet, you r able to speak so much through ur writing. If any of you readers ever read Murakami or Raymond Carver works you’ll know what I mean. Matsu-san fits the same category. Ahhh I really love your work, Matsu-san!! And lord, the theme of your story fits Japanese literary so much. Your choice choosing Japanese culture is the 😁😁

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XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor

(╥﹏╥) Kiiara your so sweet ❤️ Reading reviews like this mean a lot to me. Hope I will continue seeing your lovely comments from now. 🙈 If you spot any typos or awkwardly worded sentences, just message me on discord.

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Ahhh you reply! Your welcome Matsu-san. Thank you for writing this story ☺️ I will try correcting as much as I can, if you don’t mind me ❤️

XOMatsumaeohana:(╥﹏╥) Kiiara your so sweet ❤️ Reading reviews like this mean a lot to me. Hope I will continue seeing your lovely comments from now. 🙈 If you spot any typos or awkwardly worded sentences, just message me on discord.
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Fantastic review

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looking forward to be enveloped in this story😊😍

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Looks good so far!! I hope the author wins!

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