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2020-06-02 05:00

Wow... Good work. Lovely title, good cover, I love it and good synopsis. Your writing style is just great, same with your world background, character design and story development. There is good flow in your story. Grammatical errors and typos, cudnt find them. You even did a lot of show not tell, one thing as a writer I am trying to learn. I simply love your book and your narration. Added to my library. Good work, keep it up. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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dumdum007
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Thank you for such lovely words πŸ₯°πŸ˜β€ You have no idea how much they mean to me 😘😘😘 I hope you continue to enjoy as the story proceeds 😍πŸ₯°

BaeVida
BaeVidaLv15

Wud try my best to. Hehhhe don't b like dat, wud love to learn how to write like u

dumdum007:Thank you for such lovely words πŸ₯°πŸ˜β€ You have no idea how much they mean to me 😘😘😘 I hope you continue to enjoy as the story proceeds 😍πŸ₯°
dumdum007
dumdum007Author

you already write so well... just follow it and you will be good to go πŸ₯°πŸ˜

BaeVida:Wud try my best to. Hehhhe don't b like dat, wud love to learn how to write like u
BaeVida
BaeVidaLv15

Thanks

dumdum007:you already write so well... just follow it and you will be good to go πŸ₯°πŸ˜
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dumdum007Author

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BaeVida:Thanks
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