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To be honest, the author really tries To make a good story but i couldnt take it. The MC is just too stupid. He had a lot of chances to make a difference and grow stronger but he takes it too slowly and in an idiotic way. People can read it its not that bad but it’s not of my liking at least. Hope author can make a better character development because MC feels lacking and pretty stupid tbh.

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My Vampire System

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AnonymousOK
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yeah the first ark has lots of problems but in the second ark it gets better and better

Brayan_Ramirez_1265
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I don’t know what chapter you’re at, but I reached to chapter 49. I just couldn’t stand it. The MC felt just completely stupid(sorry if it makes you feel bad but it’s my opinion) he could’ve done much better things and advance further in the system if he hadn’t been doing and thinking useless things. I really felt frustrated. That’s the reason I left it. Btw let me know if the MC gets a better develoment and actually stars doing some smart things.

AnonymousOK:yeah the first ark has lots of problems but in the second ark it gets better and better
AnonymousOK
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i had the same problem and stopped reading too but now in the second ark every chapter he writes it gets better and better and i cant wait for the next chapter. I'm now at chapter 432

Brayan_Ramirez_1265:I don’t know what chapter you’re at, but I reached to chapter 49. I just couldn’t stand it. The MC felt just completely stupid(sorry if it makes you feel bad but it’s my opinion) he could’ve done much better things and advance further in the system if he hadn’t been doing and thinking useless things. I really felt frustrated. That’s the reason I left it. Btw let me know if the MC gets a better develoment and actually stars doing some smart things.