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House
HouseLv153yrHouse

The story could have been so good... The only real weak point in the story is MC.... MC is actually brain dead like for real his IQ is so low it's unfathomable how he manages to tie his shoes... Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐ World Background ⭐⭐⭐ 1) It took him like ages to figure out he was a vampire 2) When he finds out it takes him like 2 chapters to tell a random stranger all his secrets. (yea bro i have a system and stuff OOOO and btw i'm also a vampire).... 3) He does so much retarded stuff you think he would have killed himself by now... 4)System tells him if you don't drink blood you will run out of hp in 10h what does MC do? Noting he goes to bed then panics when he wakes up cuz how could he have know his hp would drop ...... 5) Has absolute no awareness of all the clues he leaves like if he would just use a bit of common sense.... 6) The plot is super forced In short this novel is super overrated and i have no clue why its up so high. Brain dead MC ✔ Clueless MC ✔ Below room temperature IQ ✔ No common sense MC ✔ ... So in short sure you can read it but don't waste stones on it.

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My Vampire System

JKSManga

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JKSManga
JKSMangaAuthorJKSManga

Im not I am deleting all reviews that don't follow the guidelines, which is why this is still up :) One star on the stability of updates makes 0 sense. This is how a review should be written even though they disliked aspects of the story.

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SkyAboveTheSky
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I doubt you'll delete reviews which spams 5 stars for everything with spam or emotes as its content. They don't follow the guidelines either lol

JKSManga:Im not I am deleting all reviews that don't follow the guidelines, which is why this is still up :) One star on the stability of updates makes 0 sense. This is how a review should be written even though they disliked aspects of the story.
JKSManga
JKSMangaAuthorJKSManga

Do you know why, recently i deleted a spam exp five star review, they posted it every day. i thought it was a bot account. And then they just gave me a one star review saying. i delete there reviews all the time. After that I'm scared to do it lol.

SkyAboveTheSky:I doubt you'll delete reviews which spams 5 stars for everything with spam or emotes as its content. They don't follow the guidelines either lol
SkyAboveTheSky
SkyAboveTheSkyLv5SkyAboveTheSky

Yeah make sense. Reviews on webnovel is silly XP farming activity which can be spammed every day. They should limit one review per account for each book or something, it would help authors & us readers alot.

JKSManga:Do you know why, recently i deleted a spam exp five star review, they posted it every day. i thought it was a bot account. And then they just gave me a one star review saying. i delete there reviews all the time. After that I'm scared to do it lol.
Valven
ValvenLv6Valven

I agree, but I offer a better solution: just delete the option to gain exp from reviews.

SkyAboveTheSky:Yeah make sense. Reviews on webnovel is silly XP farming activity which can be spammed every day. They should limit one review per account for each book or something, it would help authors & us readers alot.
Sung_Jin_Woo_2783
Sung_Jin_Woo_2783Lv2Sung_Jin_Woo_2783

im confused...why low on like?..mc is npc...and will never changed...

Dwarkin
DwarkinLv13Dwarkin

Thanks for review, mate! Now I don't need to read the novel 😂 I know that many people like to read about silly MC's, and there are some authors who make their MC stupid at the beginning of the novel to show how their hero is progressing, but I just feel insulted to read such novels, with a very few exceptions

Hana_Tamer
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https://***.webnovel.com/book/18605064306445905/49942638400430776?utm_campaign=4314894011 I am sorry if i offended anyone but i am new here with some skill but very lack of fans and friends here so that i hope you give it a try please

Mute
MuteLv13Mute

In my eyes reviews should be about the story, so i will give lower star ratings so the only star rating we see is lowered, who cares about stability etc when the story is trash and deserves 1 star? Should stable updates upgrade it?

JKSManga:Im not I am deleting all reviews that don't follow the guidelines, which is why this is still up :) One star on the stability of updates makes 0 sense. This is how a review should be written even though they disliked aspects of the story.
ScionOfDegeneracy
ScionOfDegeneracyLv4ScionOfDegeneracy

Then delete those other 5 star reviews with only emojis. lmao

JKSManga:Im not I am deleting all reviews that don't follow the guidelines, which is why this is still up :) One star on the stability of updates makes 0 sense. This is how a review should be written even though they disliked aspects of the story.
Raizer_Pheonix
Raizer_PheonixLv1Raizer_Pheonix

True Like with the blood addiction when all he had to do was keep samples together in a flask as he goes along and drink all at once. Similar to the blood bowl just when he really needs it. Would be the same as if he drank from one person each day :/ tho idk if he does this later. ...It's so obvious tho

Noel_Elitia
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TRY READING WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS YOU WON'T BE DISAPPOINTED

SCP3812
SCP3812Lv3SCP3812

delete those reviews, get some dude to moderate those reviews

JKSManga:Do you know why, recently i deleted a spam exp five star review, they posted it every day. i thought it was a bot account. And then they just gave me a one star review saying. i delete there reviews all the time. After that I'm scared to do it lol.
Garito
GaritoLv14Garito

there are like 3 person that reviewed it the rest are probably bots becoz many of them just post one review didn't read anything and also were created this year and ur the 'author'

Noel_Elitia:TRY READING WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS YOU WON'T BE DISAPPOINTED
Daoist7umUjl
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Yes

Valven:I agree, but I offer a better solution: just delete the option to gain exp from reviews.
Daoist7umUjl
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Just looking forward to this story to be finished already. It has great potential but needs editors and proxy ruin assistants keeping track of the plot and character names etc. Sooooo many mistakes and far to expensive for there to be so many errors. My personal issue is I want to see it end so I’m stuck, but will also be so happy when it is over as the author doesn’t care about quality as these quality statements have been ongoing from the beginning without any improvement. It’s just a money grab without the love of developing the craft which is sad. Would never buy anything from this author again unless there was a public outpouring (video interview perhaps) about acknowledging his pathetic begging for money at the end of chapters being unprofessional and his not taking viable critiques seriously and trying to improve their quality of work. Great ideas, movie worthy, truly. Very unprofessional delivery.

ExpiredRice
ExpiredRiceLv13ExpiredRice

Rumors: A friend betrayed him but he chose to forgive him. Even as far to choose him over a powerful teamate. Mc = Vampire = Weakness. Always getting harrased and humiliated. Despite getting power still plays low key because it would be wierd him being strong. Even hiding his shadow ability. From reviews idk if its true. Read until when the whole class got into the portal but dropped after that.

JKSManga:Im not I am deleting all reviews that don't follow the guidelines, which is why this is still up :) One star on the stability of updates makes 0 sense. This is how a review should be written even though they disliked aspects of the story.
Crash_0538
Crash_0538Lv1Crash_0538

Someone with a good head finally I thought I was the odd one out here

Noblesseking
NoblessekingLv1Noblesseking

The story might have been really good but only if mc had Rationality he don't twice think before doing anything.... Doesn't care about his own life and story is really show that all things in it are fake like a serial no one dies. ☠️...... No matter what situation everyone is saved ..... Atleast show lil bit of reality....

MercYURI
MercYURILv14MercYURI

Dunno if you still havent read it but you really missed out.

Dwarkin:Thanks for review, mate! Now I don't need to read the novel 😂 I know that many people like to read about silly MC's, and there are some authors who make their MC stupid at the beginning of the novel to show how their hero is progressing, but I just feel insulted to read such novels, with a very few exceptions