Review Detail of SkiIIzrock in My Vampire System

Item: My Vampire System
Rating: 2.6

Review detail

SkiIIzrockLv133yrSkiIIzrock

Decent novel, but the Mc showed his powers way too freely in a military academy...he should have been caught and locked up in a lab to be experimented on by like chapter 40. Also the author uses a lot of incorrect words and that definitely gets annoying. Like bored instead of board and even completely wrong words that sound a bit similar.

My Vampire System

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Emmanuel_CrownLv1Emmanuel_Crown

yeah

3yr

ReadingpandaLv2Readingpanda

Read Fantasy Evolution System (new novel)

3yr

DaoisthGd816Lv1DaoisthGd816

Seeing wrong words in a novel sucks. Really shows how unprofessional a writer is. I mean, Grammarly is free so they should try using that.

3yr

Fuck_LoveLv1Fuck_Love

The main character has protection from the vorden family so that's why they didn't see anything

3yr

QuantLv5Quant

Imagine paying to read this haha, i don't understand why writers in such a big site don't bother hiring an editor if they're too lazy to fix their own mistakes, at least that way people wouldn't criticize the novel because of bad translation or grammatical mistakes.

DaoisthGd816:Seeing wrong words in a novel sucks. Really shows how unprofessional a writer is. I mean, Grammarly is free so they should try using that.

2yr

BELIZEAN_KOOLILv3BELIZEAN_KOOLI

that is true

2yr