Review Detail of PassengerGrim7 in Game Master of Souls
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Okay, this novel is good. Why is that? Warning: Tiny minora spoiler ahead. Read at your own risk. Let me clarify something first in today's novels regarding this genre. Whether they are Japanese, Chinese, or original ones, they have cliches. The repeating happenings that it has becomes predictable and boring. So boring that reading the synopsis or the first chapter will make you lose interest. This one, this novel is a fresh addition because it has new gaming aspects told in a storytelling that will bait people to voluntarily go to the deepest layer of 'the abyss', LOL. Writing Quality: Storytelling factors such as the dialogue and information given in between isn't lacking or excessive. The cliffhanger is really good especially that first chapter. As per the basic requirement every author must learn, "show, not tell", the author has mastered it. It is at the level you would end up engrossed reading the story. The last thing is the fillers. Nope, there's almost no fillers or whatnot, atleast for me. Stability Of Updates: From what I observe, there's unstable updates for this one in the last couple months. But now author is uploading daily chapters. So do not worry fellow reapers. Wow, two chapters per day? With 1500-200 average words? You're a beast man. Story Development: Now, this is what I like about it. Only second to world background. Not too slow and not too fast. The pacing is excellent and far better than any novel out there that get power-ups to one punch any obstacle in the way. If there would be future face slapping events then it will be different. Overall, you wouldn't experience the ypical elements involving the gamers, people, the game master and monsters in the typical litrpg genre. Simpy because of the unique theme and setting where it all took places. Character Design: Fleshed out characters that certainly is an individual. Not some characters that simply follows the wil of their gods. Goals amd motivations, check. Personalities, flaws, addiction, and minor tidbits that makes them a person, check. The main characters arnt't some godly geniuses that knows everything one way or another and will implement everything. Tbh, I have so much to learn from the author, đâ World Background: Now this is what I really liked about this one. The world building. Having some modern element helps the readers connect with the story. Especially the memes.đ What really is the greatest thing I liked about it is the definition of the abyss, made possible dur to the death of DEATH Himself. What an irony. The embodiment of death dies? Nice. Anyways, I hope this small review will help new readers. Also, check my book, Magic In The Galactic Era.
Game Master of Souls
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Magic in the Galactic Era?! Damn, I was just thinking of writing a sci-fi book like that! Sweet, that someone beat me to it! Nice! I will definitely add it to my own list. Now to your review! Wow, is basically all I can say. Thank you for the detailed review that clearly points out what you like about GMofS! Please allow me to pin this. Lol. I'm glad you think the pacing is good, I myself struggle with this very question and wonder if I'm moving too fast or too slow with each chapter I write. Is it boring for the readers? Is it getting boring? Have I forgotten a plot point that ruins the main throughline??? (I've definitely lost track of the addiction issue!!! Thanks for pointing that out! Will emphasize it in later chapters). I think the one thing I really have going for me, which you kindly point out, is that I've got a good handle on grammar and sentence structure... otherwise, I'm always worried the work is too bland or too boring... That and the quirky characters I tend to always right, even in the Foolhardies. I love different types of voices, some I meet in real life, others in worlds imagined by better authors and creators than I... but I do try to make all of them as unique as I can. As for the world background -- brother, you ain't seen nothing yet! We're basically on the first level of the Abyss where the noobs are... LOL. The rest of it is an explosion of color and sound and delight that will hopefully make your mouth water. :D Lastly, the updates... Yeah, the slow release up to the month of June was my bad. LOL But as of this week, I've managed to come back to daily postings and you can expect it to continue from here on out. Also, the latest chapter drops at 10 tonight HK time. :D Enjoy!
Just saw this comment... well, are you enjoying the book too, FrozenApple? :) Also, love the name. Mind if I use it for a character?
FrozenApple:Okay, this is definitely one of the best review I've read. Good review will rouse the interest of readers and make them want to read the novel. What can I say? You've got my attention, young man.
OMG. An author replied my comment! Yeah, I like your book a lot, and of course you can!! Ahhh, it's an honour to be included in your book! Just use it as you like (â§ââŚ)/
GD_Cruz:Just saw this comment... well, are you enjoying the book too, FrozenApple? :) Also, love the name. Mind if I use it for a character?
I try my best to reply to every comment in my books. Least I could do to fans who take the timr to message. :) That said, yeah, I'll make use of Frozenapple. đ for a new character soon. Cheers! Don't forget to vote if you like the book!
FrozenApple:OMG. An author replied my comment! Yeah, I like your book a lot, and of course you can!! Ahhh, it's an honour to be included in your book! Just use it as you like (â§ââŚ)/