Review Detail of Carados in Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse

It looks like this should be a great novel but it has a huge flaw. The author spends entire chapters at a time to describe the upgrades the main protagonist undergoes. But he uses words that have no meaning, hyperversal, dynamics of extremity. That and the lack of understanding of infinity, distances, and time (they think in micro seconds but live for billions of years). Then the rate of destruction and creation of nothing.