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HaremImmortal
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this novel is full of narration -___- There was little conversation, and even the conversation itself was cut short. Many words or information would be good if conveyed through conversation, but it is written in a long narration. Like when MC was about to start a death match for the first time, there was no discussion with his opponent. Usually the enemy would spout degrading nonsense and insult the mc, but that didn't happen and they immediately fought. Another example is when the MC is going to Beast World. He only asked who Sophia was, there was no conversation about her transfer or how he would come back later as if it was a normal thing. Mc didn't even worry about his safety when he planned to go to Beast World.

Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse

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MidnightWolfe
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Author was too lazy

OneArmedImmortal
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negligence

MidnightWolfe:Author was too lazy