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Review Detail of DaoistZyee in Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse

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DaoistZyee
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I'm not too fond of the way the novel is written. It’s too drawn out and goes into every minute detail of the OP's daily life. E.g., “I woke up, I got out of bed, showered, I ate three lobsters for breakfast, I put my shoes on, I felt the room, I closed the door, I walked down the street.” After a while, the first-person narration gets super annoying. Not only that, but there is very little background story on the MC, and he’s not relatable at all. It's like he's OP, but there is no reason for him to be. There is no meaning behind him, OP, so it feels like anybody could be the MC. He doesn't stand out, aside from him being OP, that is. As the novel went on, I was expecting some more details on his power, and why he was chosen, and what really happened to his parents; so far, the author doesn't seem to think it's necessary. Oh well.

Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse

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Kapaarz_Rossuvea
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Completely agree, glad someone thought this as well. The choice of writing style makes the story awkward and difficult to read.

DaoistZyee
DaoistZyeeLv11DaoistZyee

Exactly