Review Detail of Shadow1stUmbra in All my toys
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A great story, one of the few great R18 content i have read that feature my fav ganre, incest,heram and slave(to an extend) but exclude the S&M play i not really into it but nonetheless i love the story. The writing is good but i would recommand the author divide the the writing into paragraph for easy reading bcs i get a dizzy reading it in a full page style, thanks and keep up the work
All my toys
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Thank you for your review. Unfortunately wn does not do a good job transcribing the formatting. extra lines get lost and weird characters are introduced. Another point of note is that I have the exact opposite complaint from the users of the mobile app, namely that dividing in multiple paragraph makes it harder to read on a phone app. What can I say? You can' win them all...
PinkCulture:Thank you for your review. Unfortunately wn does not do a good job transcribing the formatting. extra lines get lost and weird characters are introduced. Another point of note is that I have the exact opposite complaint from the users of the mobile app, namely that dividing in multiple paragraph makes it harder to read on a phone app. What can I say? You can' win them all...