This story is way too good! I say for your first time you have a bright future. Dont change a thing, this is really nitty gritty and has a solid foundation for some steamy smut! It makes me feel like i am wronging someone just by reading it as if this was told first hand or if they were real people. Deja Vu, writing this makes me feel like it is all going to change. If anyone says negative things about your novel then pay them little to no heed, they just want big dragon dongs with birdies flocking right out the gate.. Also people may not like it because it isnt just sex right out the gate, but the way things are building up and i can tell things are going going to go from maybe 50 (no penetration smut) to 100 (full on mind break harem) real fast. All i can say is that if you are looking for something to fap to immediately then at the current chapters (35) it hasnt quite gotten there, but i know when it does it will be satisfying! Thanks author-san, have my stones. Idk if they do anything for you cause i am gonna keep donating as the meager 2stones i get daily as long as he is doesn’t get in trouble with law or you go into unannounced 4month hiatus. I know being an author is hard so i mean no pressure. Much love!
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LIKEIf not this, i made a comment somewhere down on my profile you can search for. It was 40 long so i am not gonna do it again.
Fins123:Any recommendation?