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MsShei29
MsShei29Lv133yr
2021-11-08 08:48

Let me jus get this out once and for all: THIS BOOK IS A TREASURE!!! > The character development is superb! > One of the strongest, optimistic, ruthless in her own way, kindest, talented, patient, most human FL EVER! Her emotions are so raw and you feel it every single time she shows her vulnerability. Yes, she is a force to be reckoned with but she shows she is human too and Author did a great job in showing all sides to her! > The story is just OUT OF THIS WORLD! The title is "Vengeance to the Royal Ones" and the story stuck with it! It did not deviate from its goal! It was the center of the story and gained it in the end! > ML is the most supportive ever! Not overbearing and again, Author was able to show his "human" side, if you know what I mean... considering how most novels portray their oh-so-unfeeling-and-cold ML... This right here is just the perfect imperfect one! > Sure, there are minimal grammar issues and typos, especially in the chaps near the end. Though, they did not really disrupt the story and you can comprehend the story just right. READ THIS STORY NOW!!!!!!!! YOU WOULD REGRET IT IF YOU DON'T! YOU'D MISS ONE OF THE GREATEST ORIGINALS EVER WRITTEN IF YOU LET THIS PASS!

Vengeance To The Royal Ones

Llaellen
4.8
453 Chs

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Llaellen
LlaellenAuthor

wow just wow... i have no words for this review... it just boost my confidence in my stories... thank you so much... ^_^

3yr
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MsShei29
MsShei29Lv13

I am actually quite lazy writing a review for a story I read author but your story is One of those few that hooked me right off the bat and I could not put it down! I just have to write a review! You know! 😍 You're most welcome author! Deserve na deserve mo anG review because you really did a great job! Amazing story, Author! I am ready to read more of your work! 😁

Llaellen:wow just wow... i have no words for this review... it just boost my confidence in my stories... thank you so much... ^_^
3yr
Llaellen
LlaellenAuthor

I hope my other works won't disappoint you as well... thank you for reading... ^_^

MsShei29:I am actually quite lazy writing a review for a story I read author but your story is One of those few that hooked me right off the bat and I could not put it down! I just have to write a review! You know! 😍 You're most welcome author! Deserve na deserve mo anG review because you really did a great job! Amazing story, Author! I am ready to read more of your work! 😁
3yr
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Llaellen
LlaellenAuthor

This is way different than the other book. But this still focuses on character developments. Though I've included programming and hacking, I am a noob when it comes to those. So just focus on the story line and I hope you would enjoy this new ride.... ^_^

5yr

Barathi_K
Barathi_KLv10

Actually,,i am searching new novel since 5days,I finally found this gem. This is interesting novel and much more different from other thrash in webnovel with high rating( no offence),from my opinion. Ur story development makes reader hook in ur work. This fl is top amoung the fl I like . She is such a mature character,strong and learn a skill from her failure, keep positive mind. This story teach many lessons to reader also .every one should read this bcz author deserves this....this is my first book from ur work, I definitely read ur previous story also....keep going...with happy smile 😊😊😊😊

4yr
evelina
evelinaLv4

I reallllyyyyyy love this book.. Specially the fl..Amber...She is smart, brave, and know what she wants....Though she has gone through sooli much still she is standing on her feet n trying to be happy...Vrat work author..im rally looking forward to this book

4yr
kainsley
kainsleyLv3

I came back here again!!! I still can't get over of this novel this is.....this is just a MASTERPIECE I can't believe I found this Gem😀 I really like amber and Ashton the way they communicate to each other just by looking at each other and they already understand it. And how they unconditionally love each other love their relationship .I wish I had one🤭.

3yr
disastrous
disastrousLv4

I'm actually here to express a doubt. Ashton was 13-14 years old when he was together with Madison (his 1st love)...----- quiet acceptable for a teenager to have his TRUE LoVE They said she is already married at present that is during the dramas on his 19 th b'day. So she might be married way before that year. At the same time they said that those bad people have lied to Madison and her father of Madison being mistreated while she was working as the receptionist of one of the Wright's hotels. **: at the said time period Ashton was just 14 so as for his lover to be a receptionist for such a big hotel??!! Isn't it a little....after all its not a random convenience store we are talking about; for a transfer girl to be the receptionist during her part-time job....it's a giant empire hotel. I don't know about other nations but doesn't a16 year old should be in school not in university??!!! Uggghhh!!!! Let's leave it guys... After all this is just a fictional story..... From a reader's POV this is a great novel (aside from the fact that it's sometimes a little illogical) 🙈🙉🙊

4yr
yara_ellise
yara_elliseLv10

I like the fact that this novel and the author's other novel ( she's that knight called zero ) are quite the same yet different. Different because the other involves power/magic/ability that is not of OUR world and this one is about power/ability that is REAL in our society. THE SAME because both is a journey to character development and creating bonds. As for my self, I just love some mysteries in my readings which I think the author is good at. I also expect to stumble some more with the author's " words of wisdom " across this novels journey. Keep up the good work author dear... Looking forward to more chapters... and more books ( in the future ). 💛💛💛

4yr
pandaboo00
pandaboo00Lv12

I'm not very good with all the grammatical errors. But for me, this book is easy to understand. So I'll give 5 stars for this book. This book is really great and I'll look forward for the uupcoming chapters. Thankyou very much author.💕

4yr
Precious_AB
Precious_ABLv2

The plot gets more interesting as it progress. Looking forward to more updates on the novel . You did an amazing job, dear author!Cheers! Keep it up❣️👌

4yr
Emilia03
Emilia03Lv4

Heyyy thank you for updating daily and pleeeaaasseee do continue this book cause i love it its plot and storyline is so different from other books and its progress is also stable. The cliffhanger is such a pain though. Thanks foe the book and your efforts

4yr
passionrose_blue
passionrose_blueLv4

I am already piqued by this novel it is very interesting ..................................author can you please continue on with this book.

5yr
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