Review Detail of Just_Everything in One More Time: Rebirth

I apologize for disappointing you. This is an old novel I wrote way back in 2010. I just fixed some issues and added some scenes but unfortunately due to the story will end and flow I can not change the story that much. Though most of what you want to see will be addressed in later chapters. Simply, Thank you for reading.

Still would be worth while to fix earlier chapters maybe alter slightly it goes from good to okay, not making much sense, to good to what the actual heck. I really did like it but that sudden drop was enough to ruin it, despite it getting better after that. It really is great from what I've read. just authors always seem to fall to utter arrogance despite the intricate background you've set for the MC. maybe it's the wording maybe I'm just dumb an see intelligence as arrogance, all I know is it's very over used to show MCs strength. Would have been good to see an overly friendly fight between his new friends to show strength ect. Much love

Thank you for the feedback, but as I said this is an old novel, that I just added some scenes into. I did try to change some stuff to make it feel a bit better. But I cannot change some of the other things as they are set in place since it might disrupt some of the scenes that were already there in the beginning. That scene, in particular, was mentioned in the sequel novel Demon Lord's Reincarnation, which makes it a required scene. So if I changed or removed some of the scenes some discussions in the following novel wouldn't make sense. Once again I apologize for disappointing you and thank you for reading.