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Review Detail of Arduril in One More Time: Rebirth

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Arduril
ArdurilLv33yrArduril

Nice story idea and characters. That's about all I can praise this story for. Narration is incredibly convoluted, and the story reads more like an attempt at hero's diary than a novel. If you hate novels where autor has to note out POV changes, this isn't for you since the story has no "flow". Might be a decent binge-read at +-150 chapters.

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One More Time: Rebirth

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I apologize for your disappointment in the story. If I may ask what do you mean now flow?