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Rouss_0916
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So I'll be concise with this The overall writing quality is very good, minimal mistakes with grammar and enjoyable to read The story development is very nice, the ML is introduced very early on but not dependant on him, the ML does not stay around forever though so MC is somewhat independant Honestly I like the MCs character, she did get annoying at some times mostly because she had all this good stuff yet she was always 'weak', like a baby trying to wield a ace which imo is realistic seeing as she was a normal person, this does change later after the sect arc. If you get fed up of her weakness or her excessive ego at the beginning, just tide it out a bit as it gets much better later. The update stability was very shaky at the beginning but seemed like author was having irl issues so can't blame him for that, the update stability is very good now. The only thing I wish had been explained fully is the overall world, we know its a cultivation world with another God realm or smthn, as well as there being 12 big sects with the asura sect introduced early on with ML but other than that there isn't much to actually go on and I hope the author can build on this and give us a better idea of the world

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Reincarnated As a Fox With System

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KeCha
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I feel like she has a Gigantic ego from the very beginning to even after the first arc. ive read it. Thats the main thing that bothers me. She went from a human being who is sTuck on a hosPital bed which the author described “Pity me” vibe to this huge ego after being reborn as a weak fox. Makes no sense. Thats the other thing that bothers me. You can’t have the better Of both woRlds. shes weak from chapter 1 to the current chapter. I agRee that The pacing is gOod.

Rouss_0916
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Oh and by the way, Tang Li Xue still hasn't fully adapted to the world she's in, she still cant get over the mental blockade of killing a human being, obviously as a former human. so very realistic. Though i hope that she can get past this sooner rather than later and realize she needs to kill or be killed