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Gourmet_DAOAuthor5yr
2020-04-18 02:12

The story of a clan that was going to power and almost he did. He went to power from the 9th century AD. On the clan's path were betrayals, intrigues, conspiracies, treasure hunts. They were the owners of the secret of cultivation. But their path DAO was more thorny and they chose the gray path, not evil but not good. Among the clan were those who chose the path of enlightenment, a bright DAO, but for this was excommunicated from the clan. Becoming forever an outcast in the world of society. With a travel stamp. Only after 40 years, the outcasts managed to gain freedom and find lost treasures! There will be 100 chapters, probably from 120,000 words or so. The idea is interesting. Text block for 4 stars. Now the English language has become a little better and I use two machine programs for verification. Dapley and Grammali. This gives a positive result. I hope to start publishing chapters in May. While I am writing them. Thanks!

The Adventures of Treasure Hunters - 2 season

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Kamatis
KamatisLv3

Writing Quality is good!!! It's really descriptive, yet I don't feel like you're overfeeding the audience!!! Thank you, vro, I learned something in your writing style😁😁😁. Because like I said, the story is really descriptive, so does the world background and the character designs. It's like I'm in there, hahahaha. The story of different clans is interesting, reminds me of this fantasy novel that was about different clans fighting for the Holy Grail or something(forgot the title). Anyways, this is a nice book you've got here, keep up the good work

4yr

Blank_thought
Blank_thoughtLv10

The story looks promising, a lot of details to work with and events to come. You writing is good and very descriptive. I would like to suggest that you slip in some dialogues for a change of tone. Otherwise everything was great 🔥🔥🔥

4yr
Katie_Torres_3147
Katie_Torres_3147Lv13

I like how very detail oriented the story is. How everything is described in detail not just the people but the food,clothes,surroundings. It’s like I’m there

4yr
leorichard2021_6105
leorichard2021_6105Lv1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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