Review Detail of valiantxvillainous in Mr. Moon Rabbit, I'm Not Yours!

A fantasy romance full of lighthearted humor and charm! This story was a really fun and easy read with cute heart-throbbing moments that make the reader clench their heart. I really enjoyed all the cute and funny references thrown here and there by the characters and the mystery behind the Moon Rabbit. At times there are expressions that are used a little awkwardly and the grammar a bit strange. But in general, the author writes in a very captivating and beautiful way, there were rarely moments where I found it difficult to understand. I feel like the characters and the story are in general were rather innocent. There’s almost a romantic and sweet naivety that clouds the entire piece. While at times enjoyable, I did find that the characters almost felt a little too childish and pure for my tastes. There were times I felt like they could use a little more depth. I found the beginning to be a little too slow and mundane for my personal tastes. It was sweet, but for around the first ten chapters, I felt like there was little to no conflict and I had very little reason to read the next chapter after the one that I’ve ready. The main character doesn’t seem to have a strong personality and seems a little directionless in her life. I hope she can grow more and show us a stronger personality as the story progresses! All in all, a very sweet and fun read. I recommend this title to those who like light-hearted romances with a pinch of fantasy elements. Good work, Author, and keep at it!!