I’ve been reading this novel for 48 chapters and I just noticed that the author make several plotholes or Informations that don’t connect at all. The interaction between Esmi and Ryder is alSo non-sense. There was this chapter when Esmi said that she had not even dated a man before but then she’s been having *** with Ryder like all. She even said that it’S finally a long tiMe aFter she liked someone. Lel. juSt particually noticed it since the author needs to pay more heed to info dump and Make tHe chAracters more reAlistic not like robots.
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