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Review Detail of Mysterious_Pandora in Divinity: Against the Godly System

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Mysterious_Pandora
Mysterious_PandoraLv34yrMysterious_Pandora

This novel is unique and interesting in my opinion. Keep up the release rate and you are destined to be in top 10! About the story: World is not too detailed but this helps the story progressing. Balance between real the world and virtual reality is good. You will not get confused. Not much grammar errors. The story is progressing in good pace. Good flirting and R-16 scenes. Advice: Do not repeat the last sentence of the previous chapter in the next chapter. That's just takes up the space. You can add a bit more details and use a wider range of words. I don't know how the MC looks like, please change this! (This review is made when the novel just started and I will change it as time passes. Hope everyone gained something from this post.)

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Divinity: Against the Godly System

Demonic_angel

Liked by 29 people

LIKE

Replies6

Lord_Skywalker
Lord_SkywalkerLv2Lord_Skywalker

Yea

ICallOutIdiots
ICallOutIdiotsLv5ICallOutIdiots

Exp

Lord_Skywalker:Yea
Thesoultaker88
Thesoultaker88Lv5Thesoultaker88

Will he love his girls and when will be the first girl (spoiler please)

Unimatrix001
Unimatrix001Lv4Unimatrix001

Not a fan

Sean_Artur
Sean_ArturLv3Sean_Artur

Yes

DarylArradaza
DarylArradazaLv3DarylArradaza

hi... is this harem?