The story is not bad, there are some grammar issues here and there, but it's understandable, takes some getting used to but at least for me it was a fast process. I do enjoy the story and am sad to see it not receiving views and reviews, it's honestly not bad, just needs more exposition. Now, the only issue i have with the story for now is the mc is dense af, which is a nice joke for a few chapters, but in the long run gets annoying, so i hope he won't be an idiot in that regard for long. All in all, pretty good, and i hope to see more of it. I also suggest you author to try and upload the story on other sites as well, it might get more attention to it. It's hard for a novel to make it far on webnovel unless its some cultivation or ceo bs, or mainly Tits and a massive harem, i as well found this by mistake not in any rankings or searches.
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