I'll try to explain every point you raised: 1) about his blurting stuff out: he is a young kid, a bit mature one for his age but a kid none the less, he was excited about getting his letter and hence blurted out the truth as usually kids do. And since the first magical ***** he met(Tom) didn't make a big deal out of him knowing about knowing, he didn't think that it will be a problem. 2) when Tom first met him, he had to make a judgment call, call the authorities and get an 8-year-old muggleborn orphan obliviated or explain him about the magical world (making sure he doesn't tell about magic to anyone else) which he was going to learn soon about anyway. 3) he didn't go to knockturn alley to learn mind arts, he got the book at florish and botts, but he was just determined to go there if he couldn't get the book in the diagon alley. 4) how he could afford the books will be explained in the later chapters. 5) I couldn't make him a metamorph because it is a talent only present in black family descendants which he is not and he doesn't have any extra advantages except his past memories( which does a poor job at explaining magic and the magical world). 6) he knew his father's name all along, readers got to know his name in 3rd chapter, big distinction. Ps. Mc is not an op super smart person, he made some plans for himself but they won't all be amazingly well thought out plans and some may even fail, he will make mistakes. If you want an mc who right every time and will never fail at doing anything and always cover his tracks then this is not a book you will find it.

you dont do something and explain it later in later chps, it dosnt work like that cause it isnt some secret event or a big mystery, just buying books.... tom telling a kid, about the magic world, fine but questions not raised...unrealistic, he wont just let a kid wander around, he was a muggleborn, how would've even known where it existed, and why didnt he go with the family friend instead........metamorph isnt only black, the hell bru?.....its a rare skill, not a blood line, you read HP or what, this is true [wiki]..... .how the hell would he know of his fathers friend and said person not explain magic since MC could ask him instead of tom....plus how the hell would MC know he was a family friend, also why didnt they help him....dude,,,you have mistakes....alright,,,,,you mess up and cant explain **** in later chps cause they arnt events.....fix it....cause you have so many of em

If I explain everything at once it will just be an info dump which I want to avoid doing. Mc did have a reason of noticing the pub and Tom is not suddenly going interogate a child just because he was a bit inquisitive, aurors probably would but not a bartender. His fathers friend is obviously muggle (I thought that was easily devised and didn't need to be explicitly mentioned), if he went to leaky with a muggle, he would have been obliviated. All Hp fans know that while it is a rare talent, it does have genetic element to it (tonks son teddy was a metamorph too so it had to be genetic or it will be statistically impossible)

dude you just dont admit your mistakes do yo?u....you said only blacks have it, memorph whilst is a genetic ability, its also possible for random people to have it, [wiki]...dont u research yur ****?......also bru, stop arguing, dude, chp 3 beginning, YOU said that the MC's dad friend went with him to school...what muggle?....[ why the hell would I assume the family friend was a muggle when YOU clearly made it out that he was a wizard- do you even know what you are writing?]......Also the way you've written the story seems as though the MC is a person with an ***** mind, not a kid, so one would expect him to be smart, not childish, cause of the way you wrote it......... this is the first time I tried helping an author and felt as though I was bashing them...you messed up...you dont even know what you wrote...bru, I am out...this is stupid and u need to find you mistakes and learn to fix them instead of arguing..................... **: I hope U arnt a ***** that'll delete a low rated review, cause man, no offense of this bk clearly deserves it....;look, re-write, you have mistakes and you dont even know em

Seriously!? Tonks is of black descent, through her mother, her father is a muggleborn argo, it is talent from black family, though I would admit someone not of black family could have it too but there are no evidence to the fact that a muggleborn or someone lacking a magical ancestry could have it too. Mc's father was a muggleborn, he went to muggle school before Hogwarts, so can have muggle friends. About Mc's past memories, I mentioned that in the First chapter that cannot be strictly considered as memories as they have no emotion attached to them argo no life experience, no subconscious decision making (means not unnaturally smart), whole new personality with just a lot of extra knowledge but without the necessary wisdom to properly use it. Though it's very clear that you don't like either my story or my writing style. The facts that I think as personality traits, you think as flaws in story. It's ok, we are allowed have a difference in opinion. Thank you for the review, it's still my first one so it's better than having none. Ps. Don't like it, don't read it. I ain't changing ****

they went together to a boarding school- thats what you wrote..... also MC's memories..you explained yes...., but the way you write it seems as though MC is an *****

Now that was a mistake on my part, I wanted say that Mc's parents met at their boarding school, hence the vague explanation but it came out wrong. Thanks for that btw, I did correct it now.

I wanted MC to be seen as knowledgeable but not exactly wise hence the imperfect plans.

bru...you have mistakes...I explained...you deny or make excuses,,,,I am out,,,,you do you....you have to many plot holes...your surprise mysteries arent really mysteries, it would've been better to info dump and then write about an event.....but you do you... am out,,,I just advise,,,,you are author, its your art.........

Yeah metamorphmagus is just a rare ability a WIZARD is born with. Has nothing to do with the blacks lol. I decided to give it a try but seeing your comments , fuk that

Yeah that was kind of stupid how he tried to make the excuse that only blacks(I know he said that others can use it but it's improbable) can us use metamorphmagus I thought it was mentioned that wizard families only have certain talents because past family members were really talented in that subject and that was passed down through their bloodline or something like The Potter's are more talented with runes Then your average wizard well that might have been some fanfic I read