Review Detail of Mushu_The_Writer in Return Of The Ancients

I'm a new writer, always wanted to try this out. so if you have feedback or constructive criticism I would appreciate it. As far as the storyline goes, I've written out a storyline which if nothing happens I'll finish writing. I'm a college student so super busy with classes, if so I'll try to write a chapter a week or so. no promises with my schedule as it is. but I hope you enjoy this reading.