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interesting and longer than your other story, ¿you will build an empire of monsters?, I want to see where it goes. good start. wives of different races would be good, so that you have strong descendants in breed varieties. -------------------------------------------------------- Put a cover with the image you have in mind for your protagonist. _______________________ _$$$$$$$___ _______ ________________________$$$$$$$$$$_______ _ ________________________$$$$$$$$$$$_______ _________________________$$$$$$$$$$$$$$___ __________________________$$$$$$$$$$$_____ _____________________________$$$$$$$$$ ...$$$$ ___________________________$$$$$$$$$$_____ __________________________$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$__ ________________$$$______$$$$$$$$$$$$$$___ ______________$$$$$$$$_____$$$$$$__$$$$$__ _____________$$$$$$$$$$_____$$$$____$$$$$_ ___________$$$$$$_$$$$$$$$__$$$$______$$$$ __________$$$$$_____$$$$$$$$_$$$$_______$$$ ___ _____$$$$$_________$$$$$$$$$$$$_______$$$ _______ $$$_____________$$$$$$$$$$$________$$$ _____ $$$__ ______________$$$$$$$$$$________$$$$$$ __$$$$$$__________________$$$$$$$_________