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Review Detail of littlefrench in A True Beginning

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So I’m giving a harsh review here and maybe the story deserves three and 1/2 stars, but that’s not the point. First the series is a crossover, it starts by twilight then goes to **** wolf then Buffy, and I stopped reading at that point, because it doesn’t interest me anymore, the MC is utterly passive after the twilight arc (I stopped reading at the start of the Buffy one) he just lets events go on by themselves to « help the main characters grow » seriously what’s the point then... that’s not an original story, just a recap of the different series from a new point of view and although the Twilight part is well written and integrated I can’t say as much about the Teen Wolf one. Overall, this fan fic just adds a strong and rich side character to the original stories and this is not what I’m interested in reading There is no blend in the different stories at all it is one story and then the other the Cullen are barelly mentioned at all in the TW arc and he actually crosses into another world for the Buffy arc, leaving aside any possibility of us seeing the characters we started reading the story for. I know for certain some will like this story, it has extreme,y long chapter and the grammar is great, but that’s pretty much it, just read/watch the original story and you’ll have gone through the exact same story told by this fan fic

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A True Beginning

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ZonicZ
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I completely agree I'm at chapter 5 and it's starting to annoy me