Review Detail of INDOMITABLE in A True Beginning

This is trash. It is sooooo rushed and has no plot. The author makes minimal effort to add new elements to the twilight saga. It had so much potential but was also instantly ruined from the first chapter as the mc doesn’t get what he asked for and there’s a twist to his wish. His weak and the story has no plot. It’s a slice of life. How Tf do u make twilight a slice of life. Even with his granted wish he is weak which is just stupid. Morale of the story don’t read this trash.