Review Detail of harowth in Rise My Elementals!

After all is said and done, the point im trying to make is that the first impression of Leo is this kid that took over his city at a young age, and is very poor, causing him to mature early on and hunt for a living. But the author along the journey switches it up making Leo into a totally different character. I mean assassins take on jobs for money, not charity, no matter how righteous they are. Yet this super assassin with all these achievements in his organization cant even kill a rabbit, or better yet use that money for his city. I mean he only had 10,000 gold coins saved up from hunting and from his savings of couple years. There are many things that really dont add up. With each chapter an even more unrealistic truth about Leo pops up. Honestly for me this ruins the entire story. Secondly, although this isn’t a major concern of mine, the author introduces this huge planet with different races but only glosses over them and doesn’t develop them in any way. Thirdly, the whole story revolves around magic, yet even-though he’s this smart guy he doesn’t really get it till 100+ chapters in.

Finally just would like to point out, im only saying all this since i really think the story concept has HUGE potential. And its sad to see these many problems with it, only writing this so that future works of the author can be better.

"Thank you for your fair review, we really appreciate it so much! We have actually already fixed regarding all of those concerns, or let's say plot holes, you have mentioned as the story of RME progresses after chapter 100 and onwards. I can't say for sure though whether what I did had really made reading RME better for everyone who is reading, but I'll try my best to keep on improving and improving so as to not disappoint other readers anymore in the future. Once again, thank you so much, and we hope you will have a HAPPY READING!"