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The book is average nothing great but not bad. World description is messed up I mean the other races description was miniscule. The academy arch is just plain and horrible especially the system point thing borderline stupid turn upcoming mages who should be training spells into mercenaries who work jobs in order to get money to buy what they need I mean what kind of prestigious academy treats its students that way. The arch it's self is going to take long enough to bore you out of your mind. This people are not students but work force to do hard labour just for some miniscule points. The academies way of doing things is barbaric its should even be called an academy. No wonder humans are losing in this world their way of doing things is stupid. Infact the whole book is base on the academy to me it's boring as ****.

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The Academy arc is actually not an arc I personally recognized. However, it is the Academy that will open up the other arcs of the story that I personally recognized, such as the Blacksmoke city arc, Honoris Noble Household arc, Floating Mountain arc, and other future arcs that will only be reveal in the later part of the story.

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The story is indeed slow in development hehehehe... I'm just a beginner Author, so I'm still developing my very own writing style. Thank you for giving the time to read my novel, though.