Review Detail of OneFist in Successor of humanity

Item: Successor of humanity
Rating: 5

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OneFistLv63yrOneFist

Nice short chapters and definitely has potential. The concept is very interesting, but the novel would definitely benefit from a bit of polishing.

Successor of humanity

yack611

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yack611Authoryack611

Thanks, OneFist! I agree whit you. Hopefuly sometime this year I will rewrite the FTL System, as its way to complex. And change a bit of the chapters about the Aliens. After that I will propably post some chapters. :)

3yr

OneFistLv6OneFist

That's the spirit 👍

yack611:Thanks, OneFist! I agree whit you. Hopefuly sometime this year I will rewrite the FTL System, as its way to complex. And change a bit of the chapters about the Aliens. After that I will propably post some chapters. :)

3yr