Review Detail of FlyingApple1234 in Successor of humanity

It is a good short book. There are some small spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing that makes it unintelligible. Seems to have a good story idea, however it needs some work on providing information on the technological development of the time. It also has really large jumps in time, making it.sometimes difficult to track what is happening. It would also be useful to explain in more detail the challenges a character may face and the specific steps to how they overcame it. Best character is by far Thot because of the name.alone. Ooh my first serious review :D. Hope you have a wonderful day!