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2020-04-17 04:35

I just finished reading al the available chapters so far. I found it a bit odd how many reca** the author did tho. How many times do you have to remind us about the plot. Other than that, the last two chapters showed great character development. The lead of the story shows no mercy, yet at the same time, she isn’t just a mindless killing machine either. She still has feelings. I kinda feel bad for her...

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