Review Detail of RaedaX_1 in A Bored Lich
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This book inspired me to finally put up my stuff on webnovel. It also showed me how great writing and pacing is supposed to look like. The world building is one of the best I've seen and I think Doevm is one of the most spectacularly nerfed op characters, I've read. Great stuff, great author, great guy. Also love the shameless powerstone plugs, lol. Never gets old.
A Bored Lich
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Not to sound like a typical fanboy, but your stuff is great. I've been looking for an opportunity to talk a good writer and see what they have to say about proper plotting. Because, from where I stand it seems a bit jarring. Too many moving elements and potential plot hole traps, just because you feel like an idea is so good it just has to be in your novel. I like thinking up lore and potential confrontations, I just have a hard time really fleshing out characters, lol. Anyways, I'm rambling. It'll be great to chat with you of you have the time.
RaedaX_1:Not to sound like a typical fanboy, but your stuff is great. I've been looking for an opportunity to talk a good writer and see what they have to say about proper plotting. Because, from where I stand it seems a bit jarring. Too many moving elements and potential plot hole traps, just because you feel like an idea is so good it just has to be in your novel. I like thinking up lore and potential confrontations, I just have a hard time really fleshing out characters, lol. Anyways, I'm rambling. It'll be great to chat with you of you have the time.