Review Detail of Allemite in Absolute Order

This is the first novel I've ever written so I hope everyone could forgive me if I made a few oversights here and there. Regarding the plot, I haven't really prepared a proper outline; I'm usually improvising every single chapter as I'm trying to weave the plot towards a general direction that I had already envisioned. My purpose in writing this novel was to create my own world. After exploring the worlds that many other authors have created (Tang Jia San Shao, Cuttlefish That Loves Diving, Misty South, etc.), I felt really tempted to create my own. To be fair, I admit that I am heavily influenced by some novels that I really love (Lord of the Mysteries, Throne of Magical Arcana, Douluo Dalu series, Monarch of Evernight, etc.) that I subconsciously attempt to write according to their styles. However, I could only hope that I would be able to reach their standards one day. Anyway, I hope that people would try to explore and enjoy the world that I had created. Come visit!