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its actually nice,the people here are actual animal people, like in the pic..MC is an SI..its interesting... since this is an SI, would be nice to see a smart calculative ruthless MC, dude could use SI knowledge to build empire or some ****...and well also make him OP, but make him use brain more than brawn, ofcourse moments where MC just straight up just massacres enemies alone would be nice -add some romance and fluff, just dont make it shallow or ****ty,... anyway GL...stories nice so far
Forging The Beastmen
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dont introduce guns though, just saying,,,if ya want ONLY allow MC to have a gun,,,maybe the gun which only MC can use like from psyco pass or that laser gun from that anime movie,,,any GL
Variation:Tyvm my guy, and yeah you pretty much nailed what I'm going for, dark, brain over brawn, kingdom building with a smidge of romance tossed in. just gonna take a little bit to get to that point, appreciate the feedback ~
well cannons are already a thing in the world, it'll be. . done properly? I'd say you don't need to worry, it won't turn into Gate or anything.
amaturewriter:dont introduce guns though, just saying,,,if ya want ONLY allow MC to have a gun,,,maybe the gun which only MC can use like from psyco pass or that laser gun from that anime movie,,,any GL