Review Detail of mrmrcia in Reincarnation as the Imperial Daughter

I really appreciate how you're doing your best in writing! This a very romance-focused novel, and I'm sure that there will is a demographic that will love this type of reincarnation story out of all the myriads that are in existence. [The following are constructive criticisms] As a writer myself, I would like to focus on your writing style. This novel has a lot of dialogues. Thus, there don't seem to be many happenings. As a suggestion, in between dialogues you should put some snippets of minor events. For example, the MC looking at the scenery, or describing some expressions or feelings. Furthermore, instead of just using adjectives, please elaborate more on your descriptions. This will give the readers a better view of your imagination instead of the vagueness that comes with a sole word. I read until chapter 61, but I barely know the characteristics of our FML and the MLs. Please work on them. :) Also, grammar is a really important aspect of writing. Having a good grasp of the English grammar will enable you to write better progressions and transitions. We should be always learning! I did not say these things out of spite. They are merely constructive. I want us to improve together, so if you have any questions, please just ask! :D You have a story with a great potential! Please continue writing! I'll be cheering you on!