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is it too much to ask just to have placed the MC there on her own? I dont want to have to read about krypton and the DC universe bullshit. krypton and the whole race makes no sense really, trying to make it make sense just shows how illogical the whole race and scenario is.

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Marvel: The last daughter of Krypton

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How does it make no sense, please explain this further, and just one thing I didn't say this fanfic was a complete SI Kara is not a human in a Kryptonian's body she is a Kryptonian with some human memories. If you don't want to read about dc then maybe you should have read the synopsis, don't blame me for your mistake.

Seraphy64
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krypton is a planet full of extremely advanced Kryptonians, they weren't locked to their planet and could have easily escaped it's destruction, that's ignoring the fact they would have had colonies in different planets too. then there's the whole infinite power up from yellow suns, if they knew about that why would their whole race stick to a solar system without a yellow sun? it's illogical. And your summary didn't mentioned DC bullshit, just Kara. there could have just as easily been space/time hijinks as have krypton in a universe that would have been crushed by them. probably would have been easier than the garbage you put together by twisting the Marcel verse just to squeeze krypton in there. Don't blame me for your poor summary.

Sorria:How does it make no sense, please explain this further, and just one thing I didn't say this fanfic was a complete SI Kara is not a human in a Kryptonian's body she is a Kryptonian with some human memories. If you don't want to read about dc then maybe you should have read the synopsis, don't blame me for your mistake.
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I never said Kryptonians had colonies or that they even expected their world to explode, you are making too many assumptions. I didn't explain how Krypton was exactly destroyed yet, just that it exploded. I didn't explain WHY kryptonians only lived in New krypton yet, just that the red sun on that solar system gave them the ability to grow permanently strong. Holding a symbol of an entire species and inspiring hope in the hearts of an entire planet is harder than most can ever imagine but not for her, not for the last Daughter of Krypton. Please tell me how you didn't realize Krypton was going to be involved, I LITERALLY wrote the last daughter of krypton on it, if it was just an SI in kara's body the synopsis would have been very clear about that. And besides, if you don't like this "Dc bullshit" you shouldn't really have clicked to read my history. In conclusion, you are just like the average reader, you can't wait for the answers and doesn't even want to, this fanfic is SLOW, I will give answers slowly, until winter soldier nobody besides me will have ALL the history of the Kryptonians. And the Kryptonians are actually pretty well placed in the Universe but then again you don't want to wait for the answers so it's not my problem if you just make a bunch of wrong presumptions.

Seraphy64:krypton is a planet full of extremely advanced Kryptonians, they weren't locked to their planet and could have easily escaped it's destruction, that's ignoring the fact they would have had colonies in different planets too. then there's the whole infinite power up from yellow suns, if they knew about that why would their whole race stick to a solar system without a yellow sun? it's illogical. And your summary didn't mentioned DC bullshit, just Kara. there could have just as easily been space/time hijinks as have krypton in a universe that would have been crushed by them. probably would have been easier than the garbage you put together by twisting the Marcel verse just to squeeze krypton in there. Don't blame me for your poor summary.
Seraphy64
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I'm talking about canon krypton and kryotonians making no sense. Sure yours doesn't either, but I expect that from 3rd rate fanfics. you talk about me not wanting to wait for answers? I don't even care about your answers during the fic, it's the facts you've given out that ruin it. you can keep your silly decimation day or whatever in suspense and I'll continue not caring, knowing you'll probably drop this fic before you ever get around to your silly 'reveal'. she'd still be 'the last daughter of krypton' if we're she sucked into a black hole and ended up in a different multiverse. taking one character form a verse and placing it into another is the best way to do crossover, and is why I even tried reading this hot mess. so you can have interesting DC characters without the rest of the DC bullshit. your just another butthurt author throwing a tantrum for people criticizing your work.