Review Detail of amaturewriter in Death Note: The New Kira

The books basically a dude finding the death note and doing what kira did, and it seems that they are related [i think]., plus its in the future, like 70 yrs..so yah interesting,,,,plus MC is apathetic and manipulative, like so far has done any major ****, just its what his personality seems like...but it suits the dude. Suggestion: make MC win, make him smart and show his intelligence, like moments where MC uses brain to crush and **** with his enemies would be dope, cause thats what kira is.. Maybe make him build a company to back him up and help him in his endeavors, like he can write in the death note, " [ the bad rich dude] will serve kira loyally for 30 yrs before death ", and that way he can find criminals easier,plus no one will know who the true ruler of the company is Add some romance and fluff but use it to keep MC sane or moral....in the sense, that MC finds a Love interest [ LI ] and as they progress she finds out about his ****, but becomes conflicted with staying with him..... cause she fears him and wants to leave, loves him and wants to stay? or some ****, but she decides to help and keeps him sane and moral, ....just build romance, dont make the chick a shallow *****, or some whore/mom or wife [enough dxd ****]....and dont make MC a rapist or man-whore.. anyway GL