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This is a good story with a unique premise I haven't read before. You captured the MC's thoughts and feelings very well, especially in the first two chapters. I also enjoy the creative world-building and how you do a good job of introducing both the MC and other adjacent characters. My only critiques are with the grammar, particularly for quotations and capitalizing words that shouldn't be capitalized. I also hope that the stakes for this story are introduced soon so that the story adopts more purpose.
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I was planning on having a few core features and characters introduced before I get to the juicy stuff which takes way longer than I initially expected. Could you give me an example of quotations? Capitalizing is, for me, very hard because of key differences between German and English. That's why I often find myself capitalizing words that matter the most to me, and leave the rest be.