One of the best Naruto Fanfiction on this site with an amazing theme and thought provoking view of Naruto world . The Language is great and have amazing depth . Best Naruto Fanfiction in terms of details and effort put into the chapters .

The story is very well written, from the orthography to the grammar and phrasing, it's perfect and easy to read, no comment on that. Regarding the story, I feel like every idea is well developed and not rushed, everything is slowly coming into place to form a much more complex scheme with the MC at the center. I like the fact that the storyline doesn't start with Naruto's Canon storyline right from the start, but before. The way each character is portrayed also seems believable, as in there is no flagrant OOC or totally unjustified deviation from the plot. Regarding the recent development and you-know-who's appearance, I'm not too sure yet. There haven't seen enough scenes featuring him for me to create my opinion. Although I feel somewhat skeptical, I also think that with the author's writing quality, this character shouldn't be as terrible as some people make him out to be and, therefore, I am quite optimistic about the future chapters. Keep up the good work Dear Author, I'm loving your fanfiction :)

I absolutely love this fanfic and I dont know why others dont like it. I personally like the NO HAREM rule which makes the relationship between mc and main girls very natural and it feels like it has nice progression. Another thing I'm grateful for is that there is no system. I'm my opinion systems are only for lazy writing as it gives the mc all the abilities seemingly by buying them and not working for them. Instead this fanfic has actual hard work and it feels very natural. The only thing that t would like to see more of is more detailed fight scenes to make them feel more real. Overall I absolutely recommend this fanfic if you dont like Harems and systems but actual good writing.

I am honestly shocked at how well written this fanfic is. I don’t normally like reading fanfics as they are mostly not very good, and don’t represent the worlds they’re in very well. And yet, everything about this is simply amazing. I cannot wait to see more of this in the future. This story looks like it’s going places, and I am confident in this story!

Greatest naruto fanfic ever. there is literally nothing i'd change about it. this story is like watching/reading a story set in a totally different world from the show but it is still the same show. Love it!! <3<3

Im soooo glad that you stuck to actual story (even included the hoshigakure, which is a complete mystery no one touches) and not some bull**** about "ajna" or "staff of ozymandias". I mean COME ON! Staff of ozymandias?! Are you fucking kidding me?! Anyways.... you did an excellent job autho-san. Please keep it up. Its rare to see good ones nowadays..*sigh*.

Good fanfic, long chapters (something rare because the author doesn't take long to launch new chapters, something that I think is good), excellent grammar, and the fanfic is very different from others and the characters have a normal progression (not too slow, not too much quick since mc is not a god).

I already loved it before I began reading the first chapter. When I have done it, It turns out was right, the feeling of excitement can even make my brain stammer as I continue to read and even disturb my reading session every single time I see the neverending Long chapter. HAHAHAHA ;)

It's the best naruto fanfiction out there . Please don't stop posting. It should be higher in the ranking but 14 years old horney bitches don't have a brain to like this masterpiece.

Love your work, I can see how much you put into it and when seeing the result it shows... should be in the top 5 cause your fan fic feels like an original alternative naruto world