Review Detail of Clowd in (BL) The Reincarnated Villainous Young Master’s Guide to Happiness
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Shameless author, here (*´∀`*). Well, if I’m being honest, this story is kinda cringey and not at all professional. I make fun of tropes, write some sad things, some happy stuff, some filler things and world building, sprinkle in some very, very discreet romance, and plan ahead by two chapters. There’s really no outline, hence the slice of life tag. I just wanted to make a feel good novel for the purpose of a fun read ( ´ ▽ ` ). I have heard in other reviews and comments that I made some people cry, but I’m not very confident in writing anything that’s really tear-jerking, so I was surprised that you guys found it sad. Personally, I think my writing is bland. Too wordy, too descriptive, not enough interactions, all the characters seem to have forced personalities, and the MC is either too depressing and self-centered, constantly throwing a pity party or all smiley and “fairy-like” and blah, blah, blah. At first, when I wrote the story, I was relieving boredom due to quarantine. There isn’t enough of bl otome male villains living in fantasy worlds, trying to be happy, and repenting for what they’ve done stories. And for the ones I’ve read, I wish there’s more that are less pa pa pa, and more plot and development. I don’t mind smut, but, I’m kinda feeling for something more wholesome, ya know? Now, with my rant out the way, here’s the actual review. The story is a slice of life and slow, with time skips that vary from days, to weeks, to months. There are filler chapters meant for characters to bond and some world building. There are lots of characters with long names. There are no real villains and heroes. Any future conflicts have motives and nothing is black and white. No one is truly good and no one is truly bad. That’s just based on perceptions. This includes my main character. He’s not perfect and I’m not bias enough to be blinded by this fact. If I make him seem so, it is due to how he is viewed. I told myself that if a villain can get a redemption, then what right did I have to make another villain go against him? Wouldn’t that be too hypocritical of me? This is a story about the life of my character achieving happiness and atonement of his past sins. He’s done a lot of unforgivable things and he is aware of that. Again, this story is meant to be a fun read. Maybe a little sad, but it’s the journey of a man who has done too many bad deeds and died, living another life (briefly), dying again, and coming back to the beginning where all things started his path to ruins. He is finding his happiness with the second chance he’s been given. This is the story of a boy who is making friends, mending the relationship with his family, tending to his greenhouse, going to school, accepting himself and being happy. With a sprinkle of some bl on the side because Neo deserves everything good in the world and of course he needs several suitors fighting for him while obliviously looking on in confusion during the battle royale because this is my child and no one deserves him 凸ಠ益ಠ)凸. Oh, and theirs some mild cursing, so watch out for that. I hope you will all enjoy it.
(BL) The Reincarnated Villainous Young Master’s Guide to Happiness
Clowd
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I apologize for the late response. This story will not be dropped. My life has gotten busier outside writing, so I haven’t had much time to focus on TRVYMGTH. Rest assured that I will always come around to making updating the next chapter eventually. Thank you for your patience and I’m sorry for the inconvenience.
wandar:is this story gonna continue because im hoping so but if not i dont want to not know since i really did like it so far. its some what different than normal story lines like this and again plz let me know and thank you every much
Sorry for the late reply. This story is not dropped, but updating will take a while since I’ll be quite busy. I will not be giving up the story, however. Updates will just be slow. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Xaelscythe:hey, is this dropped cuz it was a great story and I loved it
Yes! But the updates will be slow. I assure you that I will always come around to writing the next chapter and providing an update.
Mandy_Smith_5038:so are there going to be any updates
I love your work so far! I’m excited for the continued story, though I understand that updates will be slow. You’ve created really interesting characters, and even started the developement of independent character arcs, in such a short amount of space- and it didn’t feel really rushed while reading it! You’re doing great!!
Hello! I have not dropped this story. The reason why I haven’t updated is because I am revising the entirety of this work. I have left Webnovel alone for my readers on Wattpad so they could re-read. On Wattpad, I have unpublished a majority of the chapters for revision. The reason why I did this is because I plan to add additional chapters in between the current ones. I didnt’t want to confuse you guys with the revisions and the new chapters. Sorry for the inconvenience. I’ll try to finish revisions as quickly as I can so I can start writing the new chapters again.
Rudia_Estelle:Hello! This story is not dropped, right!???😭 Cause I really love it sooooo much and checking daily when you will update thisssss!!!
Thank you soooo much!!! Really thanks!!!! I will really stay faithful and wait your story since I love it sooooo muchhh!!💛💛
Clowd:Hello! I have not dropped this story. The reason why I haven’t updated is because I am revising the entirety of this work. I have left Webnovel alone for my readers on Wattpad so they could re-read. On Wattpad, I have unpublished a majority of the chapters for revision. The reason why I did this is because I plan to add additional chapters in between the current ones. I didnt’t want to confuse you guys with the revisions and the new chapters. Sorry for the inconvenience. I’ll try to finish revisions as quickly as I can so I can start writing the new chapters again.
_CaleHenituse_:a new reader from wattpad here~ (wattpd name's kyeixi(i)n btw) the moment i read ypur book i got really hooked so while waiting for updated on wattpad i'll read this old version~ or maybr not since that sounds like I'm spoiling my self asa new reader Haha
We miss you! No matter how many books I add to my library, I always make sure this one stays near the top of the list so I can look out for updates. This book did make me cry. It made me laugh and smile. I watched a wide range of characters grow over the course of only forty chapters. I became attached and adopted them into my own imagination. The descriptions you find too wordy sounded beautiful and pleasing to the proverbial ear. I hope you may at some point consider taking up this book again. Thank you for your work! ❤️❤️
Author, so you're saying not to read this on Webnovel because you're revising the whole thing. But read it on wattpad where it has your revised version? You posted this over a year ago. Is it complete on wattpad?
Clowd:Hello! I have not dropped this story. The reason why I haven’t updated is because I am revising the entirety of this work. I have left Webnovel alone for my readers on Wattpad so they could re-read. On Wattpad, I have unpublished a majority of the chapters for revision. The reason why I did this is because I plan to add additional chapters in between the current ones. I didnt’t want to confuse you guys with the revisions and the new chapters. Sorry for the inconvenience. I’ll try to finish revisions as quickly as I can so I can start writing the new chapters again.
Hello! Chrysanthemum Garden and Wattpad have the revised version. I won’ discourag anyone from reading the Webnovel version, but I will no longer be updating on this platform since I have found this version in various aggregator sites. For your question on the completion of this novel, I have been slowly going through the revision process due to RL. I hope to finish all revision by this year so I can start on volume ii. I hope this answers your questions ^^.
shinonwater:Author, so you're saying not to read this on Webnovel because you're revising the whole thing. But read it on wattpad where it has your revised version? You posted this over a year ago. Is it complete on wattpad?