the story is great and i really love your concept. it was original and hoping that you will not drop the story and have a regular stable updates of the chapters. the only problems i see is that you have some mis spelled words and some gramatical errors and hopefully with in due time it will improve or hire some editor or ask someone to read the chapter before you upload to cite some errors.
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