Review Detail of King2penguin in A powerful Yokai in DXD

The story is good, however the way it set up and where it most likely go is bad. What i mean is from what I'm reading so far, the story would be bad, a real ****. -I don't really have a problem with spelling, but the grammar is bad as well as the shift of PoV suddenly make it confusing. Writing quality is 3/5 -The update is really good. Stability updates is 4/5 -The story is different from any fanfic because the mc is a yokai, but its like any other fanfic, other character's personality are shallow, they basically become a yes-men. Character development 2/5 Story development is 3/5 -Its a fanfic that is kinda a crossover, but didn't explore the world much. World background 3/5 Over all: -Writing quality is 3/5 -Stability updates is 4/5 -story development is 3/5 -character design is 2/5 -world background is 3/5