Review Detail of Gourmet_DAO in Lover Undercover

Synopsis is not typical, with some intrigue. Which at the end of the text block becomes more fun. Was there a mole in their organization? Is it not a setup? Stupid coincidence? Failure? The text block is a bit epic. Not all dialogs are quoted. The first chapters should catch the reader so that he wants to read further. It seems to me that it would be good to make the first chapters more vivid, such as chapter 4. there is immediately activity and I want to read further, interest wakes up! Composition is the construction of a work of art. A retrospective composition may be in your novel - in the process of narration, the author makes a "digression into the past." From the first chapters, and then these first 3 chapters can be put after an interesting complication, when the reader will already understand that this is a really intriguing novel. In general, I liked your novel, it is unusual, not a simple plot, a fascinating story. If you work a little on the bright sides of the novel, it will shine! Thanks!