Review Detail of amaturewriter in Indomitable War God
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just separate ur paragraph. one paragraph has 4- 5 lines. its hard to read on a small screen, cause its all clustered. just separate. ............................................................
Indomitable War God
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Noisymad:I'm doing it right now, all of the chapters should be updated to have the paragraphs spaced out in an hour or so from now.
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Not for a little while, I'm waiting until Shi gets a bit older in his new life because I'm kinda uncomfortable with writing romance for a 10-year-old even if he has an older mind. There probably won't be a harem for at least a while, if I do it. I have no idea how to write romance for one person, much less an entire harem. I might do it way later on in the story though, if people want it.
amaturewriter:chps are dope. also is romance there? harem or not?
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter
no..... no ....do what u want. shit, I am happy that some one else hates romance with 10 yr olds. its weird and wrong
Noisymad:Not for a little while, I'm waiting until Shi gets a bit older in his new life because I'm kinda uncomfortable with writing romance for a 10-year-old even if he has an older mind. There probably won't be a harem for at least a while, if I do it. I have no idea how to write romance for one person, much less an entire harem. I might do it way later on in the story though, if people want it.