Review Detail of deep_ty1999 in THE UNEXPECTED HEIR

This is the first story that I have decided to put into words. I am not saying I'm the best, but I'm surely going to try this time, to do what took me years to establish upon. If you like the story or any particular concept or a particular line or anything, do let me know that. It helps a lot in motivating me. If you don't like it, do express it as well. There is good even in bad. Hope to hear from you.