Review Detail of amaturewriter in Nulllllllllllllll

So far its nice....MC has a system but its not the normal type...[read and you'll understand]..... suggestion: Make MC OP...power vector manipulation and then later molecule manipulation-yes I want a **** you level MC.....keep MC smart and OP, not a retarded pervert...add some romance and fluff, just dont make it shallow or cliche, like chicks only like MC cause he looks good or is OP, build the romance, dont make MC or his lovers whores..anyway GL