The Plot is progressing nicely and you have finally taken into account of MC dependency on system. The only cons in the story from my point of view is the pace of the plot is kinda slow. Well I shouldn't complain since you are the author and its up to you how the story progresses. I am excited thinking about the conversation the Silvers will have with our MC. I hope you don't disappoint. Looking forward to the update.
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