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Alexander_Moe
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2020-06-15 17:42

Very nice. The story was quite marvellous in many aspects: the grammar is by far better than most of the novels on this site, Story progression is a bit slow to my taste but it is more than tolerable. In addition, the idea of combining Marvel and HP universes is simply brilliant. I think the updates are a bit slow; however, I know that art can not be rushed, thus I will wait. In conclusion, this fanfiction is simply brilliant. Nevertheless, I suggest you wait off till more chapter releases, else the suspense will most likely kill you slowly and painfully.

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CalvinTheLeecher
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Professor Dovahkiin Background A triple crossover from Skyrim, MCU, and HP Man gets everything from his Skyrim character minus Daedric items (includes memories and experiences) The world of TES, magic has no limits, everything was created with magic, the only limits it has is the one that the Aedra put to the world, but in the world of HP-MCU, they are not, it is underused and wasted by minor things like those of HP and the shenanigans of Kamar-Taj. (This is a problem being a triple crossover, good luck trying to fix that problem.) The personality of the MC is not well focused, it changes according to the scenario, unstable emotions that if they were from the beginning would not be a problem, a life in Skyrim vs. the life you had before would cause a rather strong dissonance, but no, it has much later, caused general discontent with readers. Quite questionable decisions in relation to many things, I will not write about them because they are subjective but you will realize if you dare to read. (Some are contradictory and quite strong in relation to the HP part of the story) The author does not know how to write romance, that simple, I understand the need to want to force it, after all the normal reader of these things is only writing nonsense (Harem, ML that girl, leaving a list of the best girls). A good romance is a gigantic plus, but a bad romance is a story killer, personally I prefer a good story without romance than a good story ruined by romance. The MC tends to talk trash about "Other Me" being the latter strong enough to give him his cheat, moments later he is afraid of minor things Personally, it is a good read with characterization problems and bad structural schemes for its ambition of a triple crossover and enough death flags. If you read this far, well greetings, and thanks for your attention.

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