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slavesLv44yr
2020-04-07 20:55

Don’t be fooled with 5-stars reviews. There’re some grammar mistakes, which are really annoying, like he don’t, he plan and etc. The story has just started and so far, it’s been updating constantly. There’re some time-skips, but they’re rushed. Character design is awful: if you don’t know Black clover, you will be struggling, because the author doesn’t describe them properly. World background is ****ty: just a copy paste chapter before the story. I wouldn’t recommend you this novel.

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Im_Shrey
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Well, you’re free to choose whatever you want to read . No one is gonna force you . And for some grammatical mistakes, yes I admit it myself because english is my 3rd language . I’m just writing this novel for fun. I’m not some super serious author. And as for world background i can describe everything you want it’s just annoying to read that much amount of info . This is my first novel to gain some experience and fun. Thanks for the your review 🙏👍🏻..

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